Trapped Story Ideas

Stories that never leave one place: who is stuck there, and what runs out first.

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  1. A tour bus's doors jam shut in the monkey enclosure of a safari park.Who: a driver, a club of retirees, the monkeys. Runs out: windshield wipers.
  2. A locksmith is stuck in an elevator, and everyone waiting outside finds this funnier than he does.Who: one locksmith, an audience on two floors. Runs out: his dignity.
  3. An elevator stops in a power cut with a choir of eight on the way to a competition.Who: eight singers, one phone light. Runs out: the light, then agreement on what to sing.

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Stuck in an elevator 20

  • A building's oldest tenant and its newest stop between floors, and only one of them knows the trick with the door. Who: a woman of ninety and a student. Runs out: her wish to keep the trick to herself.
  • A courier with an ice sculpture stops two floors short of the party. Who: a courier and a swan made of ice. Runs out: the swan.
  • A dog walker with five dogs is stuck when the elevator stops, and all five want the park. Who: one walker, five leashes. Runs out: the dogs' patience, smallest first.
  • A food critic and the chef she panned stop between the kitchen and the dining room of his new restaurant. Who: the critic, the chef, a covered tray. Runs out: the heat under the lid.
  • A glass elevator stops halfway up a hotel atrium, in full view of the wedding waiting below. Who: the ring bearer, age six, and a bellhop. Runs out: the organist's list of tunes.
  • A locksmith is stuck in an elevator, and everyone waiting outside finds this funnier than he does. Who: one locksmith, an audience on two floors. Runs out: his dignity.
  • A magician late for a party is stuck with his rabbit, his dove and a stranger who is allergic to both. Who: a magician, two animals, a sneezing accountant. Runs out: tissues.
  • A man rehearsing his resignation aloud learns, when the elevator stops, that his boss is standing behind him. Who: the two of them and the speech so far. Runs out: ways to pretend.
  • A night guard's elevator stops in an empty tower, and the panel shows that someone has called it from the roof. Who: one guard and a radio. Runs out: the radio's battery.
  • A piano mover and an upright piano are stuck in a freight elevator while the buyer waits upstairs. Who: one mover and the piano. Runs out: the daylight through the gate.
  • A tour guide and nine tourists who share no language stop halfway up an observation tower. Who: ten people, seven languages. Runs out: gestures.
  • A voice on the intercom keeps a lone rider company for an hour, and then the repair crew says nobody was on duty. Who: one rider and a voice. Runs out: explanations.
  • A wedding cake, the baker and the best man stop between the lobby and the ballroom floor. Who: a baker, a best man, four tiers. Runs out: the cold in the cake box.
  • A witness on her way up to give a statement is stuck with a stranger who knows her name. Who: a witness and a man with a visitor badge. Runs out: harmless reasons he might know it.
  • A woman carrying a surprise birthday cake is stuck in the elevator with the man it is for. Who: the two of them and thirty candles. Runs out: her reasons for holding a cake.
  • An elevator inspector is stuck in the one elevator she passed this morning. Who: the inspector and a tenant with opinions. Runs out: her certainty.
  • An elevator stops between floors, and a phone that belongs to none of the six riders begins to ring in the corner. Who: six riders and one phone. Runs out: reasons not to answer it.
  • An elevator stops in a power cut with a choir of eight on the way to a competition. Who: eight singers, one phone light. Runs out: the light, then agreement on what to sing.
  • Two candidates for the same job stop between floors on the way to the same interview. Who: two rivals in their best suits. Runs out: the ten minutes each allowed for being early.
  • Two neighbors who have argued by note for a year are stuck together with one pen and one sheet of paper. Who: apartment 4B and apartment 5B. Runs out: room on the page.

Snowed in 20

  • A babysitter is snowed in with three children whose parents cannot get home until Tuesday. Who: a sitter of sixteen, three under ten. Runs out: bedtime stories she knows.
  • A bus of commuters is snowed in on a mountain road with a driver on his first day. Who: a new driver, thirty commuters. Runs out: phone batteries, one by one.
  • A caretaker alone at a closed summer camp is snowed in, and the camp phone rings from cabin six. Who: one caretaker. Runs out: cabins he has not checked.
  • A caterer is snowed in at an empty hall with dinner for two hundred and the three guests who came early. Who: a caterer, three guests. Runs out: nothing, which is the trouble.
  • A family in a rented cabin finds, on the second snowed-in morning, footprints that lead to the door and none that leave. Who: two parents, a teenager, a guest book. Runs out: innocent explanations.
  • A grandfather who never talks and a grandson who never stops are snowed in at a cabin with a broken radio. Who: the two of them. Runs out: the grandson's questions, on day four.
  • A mountain lodge is snowed in with a wedding's flowers, cake and band, and no bride or groom. Who: a florist, a baker, a band of five. Runs out: reasons not to hold the party anyway.
  • A rescue dog and its trainee handler are snowed in at the practice hut, and the dog is the experienced one. Who: a dog and a nervous trainee. Runs out: the trainee's pride.
  • A snowplow driver is snowed in at the depot, with the plow. Who: the driver and a dispatcher on the radio. Runs out: the town's patience.
  • A string quartet is snowed in at a roadside motel on the way to the biggest concert of their lives. Who: four players, thin walls. Runs out: pieces all four still like.
  • A traveling salesman is snowed in at a farmhouse where nobody wants what he sells, until the third day. Who: a salesman and a family of five. Runs out: firewood, which he happens to know about.
  • A village is snowed in for the first time in forty years, and its only shop is run by the man nobody speaks to. Who: a shopkeeper and a village. Runs out: bread, then grudges.
  • A woman is snowed in with the house guest who was supposed to leave on Sunday. Who: a host and a guest. Runs out: clean towels and polite subjects.
  • A woman snowed in alone notices that the smoke from her neighbor's chimney stopped yesterday. Who: a woman at a window. Runs out: the afternoon light she needs to cross the field.
  • An innkeeper is snowed in with one guest, who paid a month in advance and signed the register with an X. Who: the innkeeper and room two. Runs out: reasons to knock.
  • Five friends snowed in at a rented chalet find a locked room that is not on the floor plan. Who: five friends, one floor plan. Runs out: respect for the owner's rule about not prying.
  • Six hikers are snowed in at a hut stocked for four, and nobody will say who ate the chocolate. Who: six hikers, one logbook. Runs out: chocolate, then trust.
  • Three coworkers are snowed in at the office over a long weekend with a vending machine and the boss's locked door. Who: three coworkers. Runs out: coins.
  • Two authors with the same deadline are snowed in at a writing retreat with one working typewriter. Who: two authors. Runs out: ribbon.
  • Two rival ski instructors are snowed in at the top station with a class of beginners. Who: two instructors, nine beginners. Runs out: hot chocolate powder.

Locked in after closing 20

  • A boy hides too well on a school trip and is locked in the aquarium overnight. Who: a boy and the night fish. Runs out: his snack, and then his fear.
  • A boy in detention is forgotten, and the school is locked up around him. Who: one boy and the lost property box. Runs out: daylight in the corridor.
  • A burglar is locked in the shop he came to rob by an alarm that seals the doors and plays the owner's greeting. Who: a burglar and a recording. Runs out: his nerve, around four.
  • A cleaner locked in a jeweler's shop by mistake hears a key turn in the back door at two in the morning. Who: the cleaner, and whoever has a key. Runs out: places to stand.
  • A contestant is locked in the television studio after the quiz show he lost. Who: the runner-up and the set. Runs out: reasons not to try the host's chair.
  • A father and his teenage daughter are locked in a hardware store, their first hour together all month. Who: the two of them. Runs out: things to pretend to look at.
  • A librarian locked in after closing hears the returns slot open and a book drop, at three in the morning. Who: the librarian and whoever is outside. Runs out: reasons to stay away from the slot.
  • A man is locked in a furniture showroom and has, for one night, a choice of forty beds. Who: one man in his socks. Runs out: beds he has not tried.
  • A museum guard on her last night is locked inside the gallery she is supposed to guard from the door. Who: the guard and a room of portraits. Runs out: places to look that are not looking back.
  • A night baker is locked in the bakery by a broken latch, with the morning's bread half made. Who: the baker and a line forming outside. Runs out: time before the loaves must come out.
  • A reader falls asleep in the reference section and wakes in a locked library with the lights on a timer. Who: one reader. Runs out: the lights, a shelf at a time.
  • A tired mother is locked in a toy store at closing, and for one night nobody needs her. Who: one mother. Runs out: her guilt about enjoying it.
  • A trainee is locked in the records room of a bank on her first day. Who: one trainee and forty years of files. Runs out: files that are boring.
  • A visitor is locked in a botanical greenhouse at dusk as the night-blooming flowers open. Who: one visitor. Runs out: the warmth, toward dawn.
  • A woman locked in a wax museum counts the figures in the main hall twice and gets two numbers. Who: one visitor and the figures. Runs out: her trust in her own counting.
  • An accountant locked in the office overnight finds a second set of books in a drawer left open. Who: the accountant and a ledger. Runs out: the hours before the owner unlocks the door.
  • Two rival booksellers are locked in the book fair hall the night before it opens. Who: two dealers, ten thousand books. Runs out: self-control about the other's stall.
  • Two shoppers who fought over the last coat in the sale are locked in the department store with it. Who: two shoppers, one coat. Runs out: the store's heating.
  • Two students locked in the science lab overnight discover that the class hamster has been getting out for weeks. Who: two students and a hamster. Runs out: places it could be.
  • The worst singer in a choir is locked in the rehearsal hall with the piano and a whole night to practice. Who: one tenor. Runs out: excuses.

Stopped between stations 20

  • A canal boat is frozen in for a week beside the boat of a man its owner has avoided for years. Who: two boat owners. Runs out: coal on one boat, kindling on the other.
  • A car ferry loses power in midstream with a wedding car, a moving truck and a learner driver aboard. Who: three vehicles and a deckhand. Runs out: the bride's time.
  • A car wash conveyor stops with a family inside the car and soap on every window. Who: a family of four. Runs out: the view, then the truce.
  • A commuter on a halted train notices one man walk through the car three times in three different coats. Who: a commuter and a man in a coat. Runs out: cars to move to.
  • A long-distance bus breaks down at night outside a town none of the passengers has heard of. Who: fourteen passengers. Runs out: the driver's assurances.
  • A monorail at a theme park stops above the parking lot with the park's mascot inside, off duty. Who: a man in half a bear suit and a family. Runs out: the children's belief.
  • A mountain railway stops in a tunnel, and when the lights come back there is one more passenger than there were tickets. Who: eleven tickets, twelve passengers. Runs out: the conductor's ways of counting.
  • A night train stops in open country, and the conductor announces a short delay in a voice nobody recognizes. Who: a sleeper car of nine. Runs out: faith in the timetable.
  • A plane sits on the runway for five hours with a full cabin and one flight attendant. Who: a full cabin. Runs out: pretzels, then manners.
  • A river tour boat is stuck in a lock when the gates jam, with a guide who has run out of facts. Who: a guide and twenty tourists. Runs out: facts.
  • A roller coaster stops at the top of the first climb with the park's safety inspector in the front seat. Who: the inspector and a row of teenagers. Runs out: his authority.
  • A school bus is stuck behind a herd of cows on a one-lane road on exam morning. Who: a driver and thirty students. Runs out: time before the exam doors close.
  • A shuttle pod stalls between a station and a ship with a diplomat and a pilot who failed her exam twice. Who: a diplomat and a pilot. Runs out: the pod's music library.
  • A subway car stops under the river with a busker, a judge and a class of kindergartners. Who: a carload. Runs out: the busker's three songs.
  • A swan-shaped pedal boat loses a pedal in the middle of a park lake with a father and his daughter's new boyfriend aboard. Who: two men and a swan. Runs out: weather to discuss.
  • A taxi sits in a tunnel traffic jam for three hours with the meter running. Who: a driver and a passenger. Runs out: the passenger's cash, by the minute.
  • A tour bus's doors jam shut in the monkey enclosure of a safari park. Who: a driver, a club of retirees, the monkeys. Runs out: windshield wipers.
  • The door of a sleeper compartment jams with two strangers inside, one of whom must get off at the next stop. Who: two strangers. Runs out: stops.
  • The driver of an overnight coach stops at a rest area, steps off and does not come back. Who: twenty passengers, an idling bus. Runs out: fuel in the tank.
  • Two strangers miss the last train and are locked onto the platform until the first one at five. Who: two strangers. Runs out: the vending machine's change.

A room nobody may leave 20

  • A candidate in an examination hall finishes in ten minutes and may not leave for three hours. Who: one candidate. Runs out: things to check.
  • A family may not leave the lawyer's office until everyone has heard the will, and the will is forty pages long. Who: nine relatives and a lawyer. Runs out: chairs, then composure.
  • A girl who never loses at hide-and-seek will not leave the wardrobe until she is found, and the family has gone to lunch. Who: one girl of eight. Runs out: pride, slowly.
  • A house sitter promises never to leave the parrot alone, and the parrot knows it. Who: a house sitter and a parrot. Runs out: things the parrot was told not to say.
  • A keeper on a lighthouse rock is relieved every month, and this month the boat does not come. Who: one keeper. Runs out: explanations that are only weather.
  • A lodger in an attic agrees to one rule, never to be out after ten, and one night sees why from the window. Who: a lodger and a landlady. Runs out: nights she can pretend not to have looked.
  • A man waits in a room for an interview and, after three hours, understands that the waiting is the interview. Who: one applicant and a camera in the corner. Runs out: ways to sit.
  • A painter may not leave the studio until the portrait is done, and the sitter keeps changing her mind about her face. Who: a painter and a duchess. Runs out: blue paint.
  • A sleepover dare says nobody leaves the tent until dawn. Who: four friends, one flashlight. Runs out: batteries and bravery, in that order.
  • A village council votes not to leave the hall until the budget passes, and nobody brought supper. Who: seven councilors. Runs out: cookies.
  • A witness is kept in a safe house with one officer and a rule against going near the windows. Who: a witness and an officer. Runs out: card games, then the officer's answers.
  • A woman wakes in a hotel room whose door opens onto the same hotel room. Who: one guest. Runs out: differences between the rooms.
  • Children at a birthday party are shut in the playroom while the grown-ups talk about something. Who: seven children. Runs out: cake, then not knowing.
  • The judges of a pie contest are shut in a tent with thirty pies until they agree on one. Who: five judges, thirty pies. Runs out: appetite, then honesty.
  • The last five customers in a bank are asked to wait while the doors are checked, and an hour later nobody has said why. Who: five customers, two tellers. Runs out: the tellers' smiles.
  • The lock of an escape room breaks for real, and the group inside takes it for part of the game. Who: five coworkers. Runs out: clues that were never clues.
  • Passengers are held overnight in an airport transit lounge over a paperwork error, and the one shop sells snow globes. Who: forty passengers. Runs out: outlets for charging.
  • People in a waiting room realize that no name has been called for two hours and the receptionist's coffee is cold. Who: six people with numbered tickets. Runs out: numbers lower than theirs.
  • Two finalists of a baking contest must stay in the tent until their loaves have risen. Who: two bakers. Runs out: compliments they mean.
  • Two negotiators are shut in a room until they agree, and they agreed an hour ago and like the quiet. Who: two negotiators. Runs out: ways to look busy through the glass.

How it works

Each of these 100 trapped story ideas shuts somebody in one place: an elevator between floors, a snowed-in cabin, a library after closing, a train stopped between stations, a room nobody may leave.

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Single-location thriller story ideas

Twenty-four premises are tense ones, in the group Single-location thriller. A phone that belongs to none of the six riders rings in a stalled elevator. A caretaker's camp phone rings from cabin six. The dread stays in the room, and nobody is harmed.

What runs out first

A trapped story needs a clock, and here it is never the air. It is the cold in a cake box, the ribbon of the one typewriter, a busker's three songs, a radio's battery. When that is gone the people have only each other, and the story starts.

  • Decide who would least like to be stuck with whom, then stop the elevator.
  • Let the way out arrive one scene after they stop wanting it.

Questions and answers

What is a good elevator story idea?

One where the riders have a reason to dread the wait. On this list a food critic stops between floors with the chef she panned, and a woman holding a surprise birthday cake is stuck with the man it is for.

Do these work as trapped short story ideas?

Yes. One place, two or three people and one thing running out is about the size of a short story. A longer one adds a second thing to run out: in the hikers' hut it is chocolate, then trust.

How do you keep a story in one location interesting?

Change what the room means. The library is quiet, then dark a shelf at a time. Change who has the upper hand too: the building's oldest tenant knows the trick with the elevator door and is in no hurry to share it.