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Ideas for a Story With an Unreliable Narrator

Three narrators who cannot be trusted, each with the clue that gives them away.

Ideas for a Story With an Unreliable Narrator

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  1. A man is certain his neighbors are plotting against him and keeps a careful record of the proof.Clue: balloons, a cake box, a banner seen through a hedge. Truth: it is his surprise party.
  2. A lodger keeps a diary proving she has never once touched the landlady's cookie jar.Clue: she describes each cookie. Truth: plain to everyone but the diary.
  3. A tour guide tells the history of a castle she has worked in for a week.Clue: the dates change between rooms. Truth: she is making up every word, and the visitors prefer it.

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Too young to understand 25

  • A boy describes the kind man who gives his mother flowers at the shop every Friday. Clue: she comes home with the bunch she paid for. Truth: she buys them herself, to seem looked after.
  • A boy describes the wonderful week his parents each took him out separately, twice. Clue: one toothbrush is gone from the glass. Truth: they are separating, and trying to be kind.
  • A boy explains that his teacher likes him best because she keeps him beside her desk. Clue: the notes sent home. Truth: he is being watched, not favored, though she is fond of him.
  • A boy is certain the old woman at number nine is a hundred years old and a witch. Clue: she knows his name and his birthday. Truth: she is his great-aunt, and the family quarreled.
  • A boy narrates a school play in which he, as Third Tree, saved the show. Clue: the audience laughs where he says it gasped. Truth: he fell over, and it was the best moment.
  • A boy reports that his big sister has a new job guarding the telephone. Clue: she jumps at every ring. Truth: she is waiting for one particular caller.
  • A boy tells how he bravely taught his little brother to ride a bicycle. Clue: the brother never wobbles once. Truth: the brother could already ride, and let him teach.
  • A boy tells the story of the day he got lost at the fair and was not scared at all. Clue: he lists every stall he passed, twice. Truth: he walked in circles, terrified.
  • A child describes his mother's friend who visits on Tuesdays and always brings him a comic. Clue: the friend has the boy's chin. Truth: a grandfather he has never been told about.
  • A child explains how she won every board game on the night the power went out. Clue: her father keeps peeking at her cards by candlelight. Truth: the whole family let her win.
  • A child keeps a diary of the summer her mother took up gardening at night. Clue: one small patch, dug the day the hamster cage went quiet. Truth: a kindness, kept from her.
  • A child narrates the first day her father worked from the park. Clue: he wears his office tie on the swings. Truth: he has lost his job and has not said so.
  • A child narrates the night the adults played a game of being very quiet in the cellar. Clue: the radio and the candles. Truth: a storm warning, and the parents kept the fear to themselves.
  • A child tells of the winter the family played a game called Not Using The Heating. Clue: everyone wins a blanket. Truth: money is short, and the parents made it fun.
  • A five-year-old narrates a wedding as a party where everyone cried and one lady got all the presents. Clue: she repeats each speech exactly. Truth: the best man said more than he meant to.
  • A girl describes the magic trick her uncle does at every visit, making her mother's purse lighter. Clue: her mother counts the bills afterward. Truth: the uncle borrows and never repays.
  • A girl is sure the new neighbor is a spy because he has two phones and no curtains. Clue: boxes labeled in a child's handwriting. Truth: he is a father waiting for his family to arrive.
  • A girl lists the evidence that her new stepsister hates her. Clue: every mean act is a shared toy or a saved seat. Truth: the stepsister is trying hard.
  • A girl narrates her first sleepover as a great success because she got the whole bed. Clue: the others slept downstairs. Truth: she was left out, and does not see it yet.
  • A girl reports that her brother now runs to the mailbox before anyone else every single morning. Clue: one envelope goes inside his jacket. Truth: a letter from his school, hidden.
  • A girl tells of the dog that went to live on a farm and writes to it every week. Clue: the replies are in her brother's handwriting. Truth: there is no farm, and he could not say so.
  • A seven-year-old explains that his grandfather is the best at hide and seek because he forgets he is playing. Clue: neighbors keep walking him home. Truth: Grandpa's memory is going.
  • A seven-year-old repeats, word for word, what two adults at the next table said, as a story about fish. Clue: one fish is being let go on Friday. Truth: someone is about to lose a job.
  • A six-year-old describes the week the grown-ups whispered and she was allowed cake for breakfast. Clue: suitcases in the hall. Truth: the family is moving, and nobody has told her.
  • A six-year-old recounts the afternoon she looked after her babysitter. Clue: the sitter rested her eyes after a phone call. Truth: the sitter had bad news, and the child comforted her.

Lying on purpose 25

  • A babysitter tells the parents the evening went exactly to plan. Clue: the children are asleep in their shoes. Truth: the plan was dropped by seven, and it was their best night.
  • A best man gives a wedding speech about the groom's faultless younger years. Clue: each story stops one sentence early. Truth: he was there for every ending and is editing as he goes.
  • A boy explains to his mother, in order, everything that happened to the cake. Clue: the dog is blamed before the dog comes into the story. Truth: frosting on his sleeve.
  • A boy writes a letter home from camp saying he is having a wonderful time. Clue: he asks three times what day pickup is. Truth: he is miserable, and too proud to say.
  • A cook assures her dinner guests that the recipe has been in her family for generations. Clue: she reads the back of a box when they look away. Truth: it is from the box, and it is very good.
  • A girl tells her diary she is not at all interested in who got the lead in the play. Clue: she can recite the lead's lines. Truth: she wanted it badly, and learned it just in case.
  • A girl writes her account of who broke the classroom window, as a favor to the teacher. Clue: she knows which way the glass fell. Truth: she was inside, and it broke from her side.
  • A grandmother tells how she met the children's grandfather, a story with a new ending each year. Clue: he winces at the same point every time. Truth: the real story, which he would rather tell.
  • A hiker writes up the mountain walk he finished alone and in record time. Clue: every photo is taken from the same low bench. Truth: he turned back at the first mile and enjoyed the view.
  • A hotel clerk assures a detective that nothing unusual happened on the night shift. Clue: he gives the exact minute of every non-event. Truth: he was asleep, and is reciting the logbook.
  • A house sitter writes a cheerful daily report to the owners about their perfectly healthy plants. Clue: the reports get longer as the photos stop. Truth: the fern was gone in week one.
  • A lighthouse keeper radios each morning that all is well and he needs nothing. Clue: he has started naming the gulls. Truth: the supply boat is a month late, and he will not ask.
  • A lodger keeps a diary proving she has never once touched the landlady's cookie jar. Clue: she describes each cookie. Truth: plain to everyone but the diary.
  • A man tells a job interviewer the story of why he left his last three jobs. Clue: each boss had the same failing. Truth: the common factor is the man telling it.
  • A man writes online reviews of his own restaurant under seven names. Clue: all seven misspell the same word. Truth: so does the menu.
  • A manager writes a glowing reference for the clerk she most wants to be rid of. Clue: every compliment is about how far he could go. Truth: she means away.
  • A neighbor explains to the police why he was in the next garden at midnight with a spade. Clue: his story leaves out the bulbs in his pocket. Truth: he has been secretly planting her flowers.
  • A real estate agent walks a couple through a house, narrating its charm. Clue: she stands in front of the cellar door twice. Truth: the damp, and she needs this sale.
  • A runner describes for the school paper the race she lost to a lucky rival. Clue: she knows the rival's training times by heart. Truth: the rival earned it, and she knows.
  • A sea captain's log records a calm and uneventful crossing. Clue: the handwriting changes on day nine. Truth: someone else has kept the log since the storm.
  • A shopkeeper tells an inspector that her scales have always weighed exactly right. Clue: she keeps one thumb out of sight. Truth: the scales are honest, and the thumb is not.
  • A student narrates how he wrote his prize essay alone over one heroic weekend. Clue: he thanks his roommate for the coffee. Truth: the roommate wrote the half that won.
  • A tour guide tells the history of a castle she has worked in for a week. Clue: the dates change between rooms. Truth: she is making up every word, and the visitors prefer it.
  • A witness describes the stranger she saw leaving the bakery, in confident detail. Clue: the details fit the man who annoyed her last week. Truth: she saw nobody clearly.
  • A woman writes her memoir and gives her sister one line. Clue: the sister is in the background of every photograph described. Truth: the sister did what the memoir claims.

Honestly mistaken 25

  • A boy narrates his plan to run away, which he believes nobody suspects. Clue: a packed lunch appears beside his bag. Truth: his mother knows, and is letting him get to the corner.
  • A grandfather tells of the great flood of his boyhood, when the water reached the church clock. Clue: the church is on a hill. Truth: he was four, it reached his knees, and that was high enough.
  • A lodger notes that the family downstairs goes silent whenever she comes in. Clue: they speak another language among themselves. Truth: they switch to hers out of politeness and run out of words.
  • A man describes the stranger who has been following him through the city all afternoon. Clue: the stranger is always ahead of him. Truth: he is the one following, lost and afraid to ask.
  • A man is certain his neighbors are plotting against him and keeps a careful record of the proof. Clue: balloons, a cake box, a banner seen through a hedge. Truth: it is his surprise party.
  • A man narrates the heroic night he scared off a burglar. Clue: the burglar left a casserole. Truth: it was the neighbor returning a dish.
  • A man recalls his school days as the happiest of his life and wonders why nobody comes to reunions. Clue: each fond story has a victim. Truth: he was the bully, and has never seen it.
  • A man writes about the dog that has adopted him and waits at his gate each morning. Clue: the dog arrives just behind the mail carrier. Truth: it is following the treats in the mailbag.
  • A man writes about the summer his town forgot his birthday. Clue: cards arrive a day later, all apologizing. Truth: he told everyone the wrong date.
  • A new teacher writes home about the class that adores him. Clue: they fall silent whenever he turns around. Truth: they are up to something, and it is a kindness.
  • A retired detective is sure the new family across the street is a gang in hiding. Clue: late deliveries, covered windows, odd hours. Truth: they are bakers, and the street's bread improves.
  • A ship's passenger records in his diary that the crew is growing strangely unfriendly. Clue: he mentions his singing each evening. Truth: the singing.
  • A sports commentator narrates the match he is certain his home team is winning. Clue: he keeps explaining away the scoreboard. Truth: they had lost by halftime.
  • A tourist writes postcards describing a city he believes is the capital. Clue: no landmark matches the guidebook. Truth: he got off one stop early and is enjoying the wrong town.
  • A traveler describes a village festival he believes is held every year in his honor. Clue: he always arrives on the same date. Truth: the date is the festival's, not his.
  • A woman is convinced her memory is perfect and narrates a family vacation to prove it. Clue: the weather changes mid-sentence. Truth: she has stitched three vacations into one.
  • A woman is sure the house she has rented is haunted, and narrates each night's evidence. Clue: the moaning stops at nine sharp. Truth: a boy next door practices the tuba until bedtime.
  • A woman narrates a chess match she is certain her opponent is losing on purpose. Clue: his moves get simpler as hers get bolder. Truth: he is a beginner, and there is no plan to beat.
  • A woman narrates a dinner party at which, she is pleased to report, she said the right thing all evening. Clue: the silences she takes for admiration. Truth: each remark landed badly.
  • A woman narrates her careful investigation into who has been stealing from her garden. Clue: every trail ends at her own back door. Truth: she picks the tomatoes herself, half asleep at dawn.
  • A woman narrates her certainty that the portrait in the hall has begun to smile. Clue: she has begun to smile at it. Truth: the change is in her, and that is the better story.
  • A woman narrates her first week in a new town where, she notes, nobody returns a good morning. Clue: she has not reset her watch. Truth: she has been greeting them at dawn.
  • A woman tells how she alone kept the office running while her colleagues did nothing. Clue: tasks finish themselves while she is at lunch. Truth: the colleagues quietly redo her work.
  • An explorer's journal records the discovery of an island no one has ever seen. Clue: a path, a bench, a trash can. Truth: it is a park, and he has landed on the far side of it.
  • An old sailor swears the lighthouse was dark the night his boat came in. Clue: he also swears he was facing the harbor. Truth: he was facing out to sea, and has blamed the keeper since.

Boasting 25

  • A boy narrates how he caught the biggest wave of the summer. Clue: his hair is dry in the photograph. Truth: his sister caught it, and he held the towel.
  • A boy tells the class how he spent the summer training with a professional team. Clue: he cannot name the town. Truth: he collected balls at one open day, the best day of his year.
  • A cat narrates how it guards the house, alone, from intruders. Clue: the intruders are a leaf, a moth and its own tail. Truth: the dog does the guarding.
  • A climber tells the bar about the cliff nobody else has dared. Clue: there is a tea room at the top. Truth: there is also a path.
  • A coach tells the new team about the season he never lost a game. Clue: he never says how many were played. Truth: two, both called off for rain.
  • A cook claims his chili has won every contest in the county. Clue: the county has had one contest. Truth: he was the only entry, and the judge had seconds anyway.
  • A dog show champion's owner explains his training method. Clue: the dog looks at his wife before every trick. Truth: she trains it, at six each morning.
  • A fisherman tells the inn how he landed a fish so large it towed his boat home. Clue: the fish grows a foot each time the door opens. Truth: there was a fish, small, and he let it go.
  • A girl tells the new student that she is the fastest runner in the school. Clue: she adds a new exception each time. Truth: she is fourth, and the new student is about to be first.
  • A grandmother claims she once danced with a prince. Clue: the prince has a different country every time. Truth: he was a waiter, and a better dancer than any prince.
  • A hunter tells how he once tracked a bear for three days through a blizzard. Clue: the bear's tracks always ran the same way as his own. Truth: the bear was following him.
  • A knight narrates his defeat of a dragon to a hall that has heard it before. Clue: his squire coughs at the brave parts. Truth: the squire talked the dragon round.
  • A man describes his garden as the finest in the street, to a visitor who lives next door. Clue: he gestures over the fence a great deal. Truth: the flowers he is proud of are hers.
  • A man tells his grandchildren he once walked to school through snow up to his chin. Clue: the walk gets longer each winter. Truth: the school was next door.
  • A man tells how he once beat a chess master in nine moves. Clue: he cannot remember which color he played. Truth: the master was eight years old at the time.
  • A mayor's memoir recounts how she saved the town in the great storm. Clue: one line thanks various helpers. Truth: the helpers filled the sandbags, and she held the lantern.
  • A retired actor describes the night the whole theater rose to its feet for him. Clue: he mentions the bells. Truth: it was a fire drill.
  • A sailor swears he has sailed all seven seas and names nine. Clue: the extra two. Truth: he has worked one ferry for thirty years, and knows that water better than anyone.
  • A soldier home from a quiet posting tells the tavern about his campaigns. Clue: every campaign is somewhere with a good bakery. Truth: he was the regiment's cook, and a fine one.
  • A traveler tells an inn about the far city where the streets are paved with silver. Clue: each listener's question adds a street. Truth: he never got past the gate, and it was raining.
  • A wizard's apprentice describes the spell that made her famous throughout the land. Clue: the land is one valley wide. Truth: the spell went wrong, usefully.
  • A woman tells her walking group she has climbed every hill in the county. Clue: she describes each summit by its parking lot. Truth: she drives up, and waits with coffee for the rest.
  • A woman tells how she taught herself seven languages in a year. Clue: she orders coffee the same way in all of them. Truth: seven greetings, learned for seven new neighbors.
  • An explorer lectures on the mountain she was first to climb. Clue: her slides are all of the base camp. Truth: her guide went up alone and brought her a stone.
  • An inventor demonstrates the machine that, he says, changed the world. Clue: it is still in its crate. Truth: his assistant's smaller machine did, and is in every kitchen.

How it works

These 100 ideas for a story with an unreliable narrator are sorted by why the teller cannot be trusted: too young, lying, mistaken or boasting. Under each is the clue and the truth the reader works out.

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Unreliable narrator short story ideas, sorted by why

The reason decides the clue: a liar slips, a child repeats what they do not understand, a boaster overreaches, and the honestly mistaken give every fact and the wrong conclusion.

Suspenseful short story ideas with an unreliable narrator

The group Suspenseful gathers the tense ones: a hotel clerk who gives the exact minute of every non-event, a ship's log whose handwriting changes on day nine. The dread sits in the gap between the telling and the clue, and nobody in them is harmed.

  • Plant the clue early and in plain sight. A reader who turns back should find it waiting.
  • Three signs readers catch: the narrator contradicts themself, has gaps in memory, or lies to another character.

Questions and answers

What is an unreliable narrator?

A narrator the reader cannot trust, or one of damaged credibility. The critic Wayne C. Booth coined the term in The Rhetoric of Fiction (1961). The first-person narrator is the most common kind.

How do I write a story with an unreliable narrator?

Decide the truth first, then why the narrator cannot tell it. Give the reader one clue the narrator reports without seeing its weight, such as a house sitter whose cheerful reports grow longer as the photos stop.

Does an unreliable narrator have to be lying?

No. A liar knows the truth and hides it. A child repeats exactly what was said and misses what it meant, and a mistaken narrator believes every word. On this list the liars and the boasters know better; the children and the mistaken do not.

Can a child be an unreliable narrator?

Yes. One study of the device calls a narrator too inexperienced to judge what they report the naif. Here a six-year-old describes suitcases in the hall and cake for breakfast, and the reader sees a family about to move. Nothing she says is false.

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