Redemption Story Writing Prompts

Someone did a wrong you can name and sets out to mend it, three premises at a time.

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  1. A retired thief starts taking things back in the order she stole them, each one mended, and the first owner has moved.Owed: a list of forty names. Cost: a note goes with each, and her address is on every one.
  2. A ghost may rest only when an old wrong is put right, and putting it right means the house leaves the family she stayed for.Owed: the heirs of a cheated partner. Cost: the house, and with it her reason to have stayed.
  3. A violin teacher told his most gifted pupil that she had no talent, to keep first chair for his own daughter.Owed: the pupil, now forty and a piano mover. Cost: saying it with his daughter in the room.

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The wrong and who was hurt 25

  • A boy let the new kid be blamed for pulling the fire alarm and watched him change schools. Owed: the new kid. Cost: telling his own parents, who boast that he has never lied.
  • A captain left a slower ship behind in the convoy to make port on time, and it limped in a month late with its cargo spoiled. Owed: that crew, unpaid for the voyage. Cost: his bonus, then his command.
  • A coach cut his hardest-working player to make room for the son of a donor. Owed: the player. Cost: the new scoreboard, and telling the team where it came from.
  • A daughter signed her father's name to sell his boat while he was in the hospital. Owed: her father. Cost: buying it back from a man who has renamed it and will not hurry.
  • A dragon burned a valley's harvest in a fit of temper, and the valley went hungry for a winter. Owed: the farmers. Cost: a year in harness, pulling their plows.
  • A girl entered her grandmother's unpublished poems in a contest under her own name, and won. Owed: the grandmother, who read them in the newspaper. Cost: the scholarship that came with the prize.
  • A girl started a rumor that ended her best friend's season on the team. Owed: the friend. Cost: the captain's armband, which she won in the friend's place.
  • A guitarist walked out on his band the night before the tour that would have made them. Owed: three bandmates, now a plumber, a teacher and a clerk. Cost: the solo career built on that night.
  • A house robot obeyed an order it knew to be wrong and wiped a family's whole archive of photographs. Owed: the family. Cost: years of rebuilding the albums from the neighbors' copies, one face at a time.
  • A judge at a spelling bee let one wrong letter pass so that a friend's child would win. Owed: the girl who came second. Cost: her seat at the judges' table, which she has held for thirty years.
  • A king broke a treaty the day after he signed it, and a neighboring people lost their grazing land. Owed: the herders. Cost: the land back, and with it the fort that makes his border safe.
  • A knight ran from the bridge he had sworn to hold, and a village paid bandits a toll on it for ten years. Owed: the village. Cost: ten years as its bridge keeper, at no wage, under his own name.
  • A man sold his grandmother's farm out from under her while she was away nursing a sister. Owed: her. Cost: his own house, since the farm is worth twice what he got.
  • A mapmaker left a village off the king's map because its headman had insulted him, and no road was ever built to it. Owed: the village. Cost: walking the survey himself, and a new map with his old one's fault marked on it.
  • A mayor took the credit for a flood wall designed by a rival, and then ran the rival out of town. Owed: the rival. Cost: the plaque, the next election and a public letter asking her back.
  • A referee gave away a championship game to help a friend who was in debt. Owed: the twelve players who lost. Cost: his name comes off the gym he is about to have named after him.
  • A reporter made up one quote, and a family restaurant closed within the year. Owed: the cook and his children. Cost: the prize that story won, and the job it got her.
  • A scientist published her assistant's result under her own name. Owed: the assistant, who left science. Cost: the chair of the department, which she takes up in a month.
  • A starship pilot blamed her own navigation error on a cadet, who was sent home in disgrace. Owed: the cadet. Cost: her wings, on the eve of the voyage she trained ten years for.
  • A teenager took from the tip jar at his aunt's cafe all summer, and the new waitress was let go for it. Owed: the waitress. Cost: the summer's money back, and his aunt's trust at the till.
  • A translator softened a warning to keep a deal alive, and a town was built on the flood plain. Owed: four hundred households. Cost: her license, and every contract that she brokered after it.
  • A violin teacher told his most gifted pupil that she had no talent, to keep first chair for his own daughter. Owed: the pupil, now forty and a piano mover. Cost: saying it with his daughter in the room.
  • A witness kept quiet, and an honest clerk lost his post for a theft he did not commit. Owed: the clerk. Cost: naming the real thief, who is the witness's brother.
  • A wizard's apprentice sold his master's spell book one page at a time to pay for his lodging. Owed: the master. Cost: getting back each page from a buyer who has come to depend on it.
  • A woman let her sister take the blame for a wrecked car and has let her go on taking it for twenty years. Owed: the sister. Cost: their father's good opinion, which is why she was left the house.

The first step back 25

  • A boy who walked off the relay team in the middle of a race asks to carry the water bottles next season. Owed: three teammates. Cost: a year on the bench in a team shirt with no number.
  • A brother who kept the whole inheritance brings his sister half of it and a ledger of what that half would have earned. Owed: the sister. Cost: the interest, which is more than he has left.
  • A captain who gambled away her crew's wages signs on as a deckhand aboard their new ship. Owed: the crew. Cost: taking orders from her old cabin boy until the debt is worked off.
  • A champion who won by a trick his opponent never spotted writes to her to explain how it was done. Owed: the opponent. Cost: the title, and every win since that people will now doubt.
  • A former bully takes a job as the crossing guard at the school where he was feared, and learns every child's name. Owed: a generation of smaller children, grown now. Cost: standing where their parents can see him.
  • A fox who talked the geese out of their winter grain turns up at the barn in spring with a sack and a spade. Owed: the geese. Cost: planting the whole field himself while they watch from the fence.
  • A girl who read her friend's letters aloud at a party begins by handing over her own diary. Owed: the friend. Cost: every page, including the ones about the friend.
  • A grandfather who would not come to his daughter's wedding turns up at his grandchild's school play and stands at the back. Owed: the daughter. Cost: staying to the end, and waiting by the door to be seen.
  • A knight who collected taxes for a tyrant walks to each village on his old route and asks for the worst job it has. Owed: nineteen villages. Cost: a season of ditches, latrines and wells, with the first village watching.
  • A landlord who put a family out in winter spends a spring finding where they went. Owed: the family. Cost: the apartment, offered back at the old rent, and a no he must be ready to hear.
  • A man who lied his way into a friend's job starts by training the friend for the job above it. Owed: the friend. Cost: a boss who knows precisely how he got there.
  • A man who lied on the stand asks a court clerk how a person takes back a thing said under oath. Owed: the neighbor his lie cost a house. Cost: the answer is a charge against himself.
  • A man who once informed on his neighbors moves back to the town and leaves his front door open every evening. Owed: the whole street. Cost: hearing out whoever comes in, for as long as they come.
  • A mother who missed every recital learns to play the piece her daughter played at the one that mattered. Owed: the daughter. Cost: two years of lessons from the daughter's old teacher, who remembers the empty seat.
  • A novelist who put her family's secrets into a book asks each of them what they would like cut from the next printing. Owed: her mother, two brothers and an aunt. Cost: the chapters the reviewers praised.
  • A player who once took a bribe coaches the youth team for nothing and tells them on the first day exactly why. Owed: his old teammates. Cost: the children's parents hear it by supper.
  • A retired forger takes a job at the museum he fooled, writing the labels for his own fakes. Owed: the museum and its visitors. Cost: his three best pieces come down, with his name on the reason.
  • A retired thief starts taking things back in the order she stole them, each one mended, and the first owner has moved. Owed: a list of forty names. Cost: a note goes with each, and her address is on every one.
  • A sorcerer who turned a rival into a heron spends years learning to undo it, and the first step is asking the heron. Owed: the heron. Cost: the heron has grown to like the river, and wants an apology and not the cure.
  • A student who wrecked a rival's science project knocks at her door with a soldering iron the night before the next fair. Owed: the rival. Cost: his own entry stays at home, unfinished.
  • A town that ran a family out twenty years ago sends its mayor, on foot, to ask them back. Owed: the family. Cost: the mayor's own house, which used to be theirs.
  • A woman who cheated her partner out of their bakery comes in every morning for one loaf and is served last. Owed: the partner behind the counter. Cost: the line, every morning, with the whole street in it.
  • A woman who never visited her mother in the care home starts reading aloud to the residents on Thursdays. Owed: her mother, who is past being told. Cost: Thursday after Thursday with nobody there to forgive her.
  • An android that reported its crewmates' private talk to the company asks them to take out its transmitter themselves. Owed: a crew of six. Cost: it will be deaf to the ship's net, and so no use for half its work.
  • Thirty years after he left, a father writes to his son, gets the letter back unopened, and writes again the next month. Owed: the son. Cost: a letter every month to a door that may never open.

The price 25

  • A boy whose friend was held back a year for a prank they both pulled can make it even only by repeating the year himself. Owed: the friend. Cost: a year, and the class he would have graduated with.
  • A clerk who buried one complaint to please a manager learns that to find it again she must dig out all four hundred. Owed: a customer who gave up writing. Cost: the manager's favor, and a winter of evenings in the basement.
  • A ghost may rest only when an old wrong is put right, and putting it right means the house leaves the family she stayed for. Owed: the heirs of a cheated partner. Cost: the house, and with it her reason to have stayed.
  • A lighthouse keeper slept through his watch, the lamp went out, and a fishing boat ran aground and was lost with its catch. Owed: the fisherman, who got ashore with nothing. Cost: the keeper's wage, until it has bought a boat.
  • A man can prove his brother innocent only by saying where he himself was that night. Owed: the brother. Cost: his seat on the council, since where he was is the thing he campaigned against.
  • A man who never repaid a loan finds that his friend has died and the debt has passed to a son who cannot stand him. Owed: the son. Cost: paying, in installments, a man who will not shake his hand.
  • A merchant who knowingly sold bad seed must feed the valley through the winter that follows. Owed: thirty farms. Cost: every coin, and then the ship.
  • A prince can undo an unjust banishment only by serving the same seven years in the banished man's place. Owed: a steward sent away on the prince's lie. Cost: seven years, and the coronation that falls inside them.
  • A queen who seized a rival's castle can give it back only by moving her court out of the one keep fit for the winter. Owed: the rival's children. Cost: a winter under canvas, and the nobles who will not follow her into it.
  • A reporter who exposed the wrong man must run the correction as large as the headline, in her last week before a bigger job. Owed: the man. Cost: the bigger job.
  • A runner who cheated must hand back the medal to the same crowd, in the same stadium, on the anniversary. Owed: the runner who came second. Cost: the walk across the infield, which is longer than the race was.
  • A shepherd who grazed his flock on a neighbor's hay meadow by night owes her a winter of feed. Owed: the neighbor. Cost: half of his own stack, carried across the valley in daylight.
  • A singer can credit the writer of the song she stole only by admitting that the rest of her first album was stolen too. Owed: a busker she heard once. Cost: the album, and the house it bought.
  • A sister who told a secret can stop the talk only by giving the town a bigger one, which is her own. Owed: her younger sister. Cost: her own good name, traded for the other's.
  • A teacher who failed a student out of spite can change the grade only by telling the board that is about to promote her. Owed: the student, who lost a scholarship. Cost: the promotion, and a note on her file.
  • A thief can return a painting only the way it left: through the same window, past the same dog, grown old now. Owed: the family whose wall has a pale square. Cost: one more break-in, with a record that makes it prison.
  • A trainer who sold a family a horse he knew was lame can put it right only with the best mare in his own yard. Owed: a girl who saved two years for that horse. Cost: the mare he meant to build his stable on.
  • A wizard can lift a spell he cast in anger only by carrying it himself for as long as its victim did. Owed: a miller who has not been able to speak above a whisper in nine years. Cost: nine years of whispering.
  • A woman can own up to the anonymous letter only by losing the friend she wrote it to protect. Owed: the neighbor the letter accused. Cost: the friendship it was written for.
  • A woman can return her friend's lost savings only by selling the shop she built with them. Owed: the friend. Cost: the shop, with her own name over the door.
  • An actor who took a part by lying about a rival must give it back on opening night. Owed: the rival, who knows the lines. Cost: the review that would have made him.
  • An engineer who hid a fault to meet the launch date must call back the ship in the one week it could have reached the comet. Owed: the crew aboard. Cost: the mission of her life, and the next comet is seventy years off.
  • An inventor can clean the river her machine fouled only by taking apart the machine that made her fortune. Owed: the towns downstream. Cost: the works, the patents and three hundred jobs she must replace.
  • To clear a man she convicted with evidence she knew was thin, a prosecutor would have to reopen every case she ever won. Owed: the man, four years on. Cost: her record, and perhaps other verdicts with it.
  • To give back the field his grandfather cheated a neighbor out of, a farmer must give up the half with the well. Owed: the neighbor's granddaughter. Cost: water, which he would then have to buy from her.

Forgiven or not 25

  • A boy apologizes to the wrong twin, and she accepts on her sister's behalf and names the terms. Owed: the other twin. Answer: yes, from the wrong one, and a month of carrying both their bags.
  • A crew takes back the captain who abandoned it, as the ship's cook. Owed: the crew. Answer: yes, on galley wages, and the new captain tastes everything first.
  • A ghost who has haunted the wrong family for a century apologizes, and the family asks it to stay. Owed: four generations. Answer: yes, and would it mind going on with the cold spot in the pantry.
  • A giant who flattened a village's fields in his sleep is forgiven first by the children, who want a ride. Owed: the village. Answer: yes from everyone under ten, and a list of repairs from everyone over.
  • A girl is forgiven by the friend she betrayed and finds that the friend's mother has not forgiven her at all. Owed: the friend. Answer: yes from one, and a closed kitchen door from the other.
  • A king pardons the minister who betrayed him and finds that the minister cannot pardon himself. Owed: the king. Answer: yes from the throne, and a resignation on the table every morning.
  • A knight brings back the banner he stole from a rival house, and they hang it up again without a word and shut the gate. Owed: the house. Answer: the banner is taken, and he is not.
  • A man asks his oldest friend for forgiveness and is told that it was given years ago, and that he is still not welcome. Owed: the friend. Answer: forgiven for my own sake, and no, you may not come to supper.
  • A man asks to be forgiven, is told no, and has to work out what a decent life looks like without it. Owed: a former friend. Answer: no, said calmly, and never changed.
  • A man finds the classmate he tormented in order to apologize, and she does not remember him. Owed: her. Answer: none she can give. He must decide whether to remind her.
  • A man waits three days on a porch for an answer, and on the third evening the door opens and a hand sets down a plate. Owed: his brother. Answer: supper, and no word yet.
  • A man who left his family comes home and is forgiven by everyone but the dog. Owed: a wife, two children and a terrier. Answer: the dog sleeps across the bedroom door for a year.
  • A man writes to say sorry to a teacher he drove out of the profession, and she returns the letter marked in red. Owed: the teacher. Answer: a B, three corrections, and an invitation to tea.
  • A neighbor is shown the sapling planted where her felled tree stood and says to come back in forty years. Owed: the neighbor. Answer: not yet, and she means it kindly.
  • A robot asks a family to forgive it, and they argue over whether a machine can be forgiven until the youngest just does. Owed: the household. Answer: a debate from four, and a yes from the one who is six.
  • A sister forgives her brother's debt and keeps the receipt on the door of her refrigerator. Owed: the sister. Answer: yes, and you will see that slip of paper at every family dinner.
  • A town forgives the ferryman who left it stranded in a flood, a year after he has moved away. Owed: the far bank. Answer: yes, voted at a meeting, and sent to an address that nobody has.
  • A woman comes home to apologize to a neighbor, learns that he died in the spring, and says it to his garden bench. Owed: the neighbor. Answer: none, until his widow comes out with two cups.
  • A woman forgives her mother in a letter she never means to send, and her mother finds it. Owed: the daughter, as it turns out. Answer: a letter back, which is the first apology in the family.
  • A woman is told that she will be forgiven on one condition: she must tell the children herself what she did. Owed: her brother. Answer: yes, once his children have heard it from her.
  • A woman returns what she stole and is forgiven at once, so easily that she cannot believe it and keeps trying to pay. Owed: an old shopkeeper. Answer: yes, three times, and then a request to stop coming in.
  • A woman says that she forgives him, in the voice she uses for customers. Owed: his sister-in-law. Answer: yes in words. He will have to earn the other kind.
  • An old rival forgives a man from the stage at an awards dinner, in a way that tells the whole room what he did. Owed: the rival. Answer: yes, at full volume, which he finds is worse than no.
  • The friend he wronged sets a price on forgiving him: one honest year, to be judged by her. Owed: the friend. Answer: ask me again in twelve months, and I will know.
  • Two old partners each travel to apologize for the same quarrel and argue over which of them gets to. Owed: each other. Answer: yes from both, after a second quarrel about the first.

How it works

Each of these 100 redemption story writing prompts states the wrong plainly: a thrown game, a stolen result, a sister left to take the blame. The line under it names who is owed and what putting it right will cost.

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Four places to start

The wrong and who was hurt opens at the deed. The first step back opens years later, when a former bully takes the job of crossing guard at his old school. The price is for stories where the cost is the whole plot. Forgiven or not is about the answer, and the line under each gives it.

Writing prompts about redemption need a bill

An apology costs nothing, so it is not yet a story. Here the referee loses the gym that was to carry his name, and the farmer gives up the half of the field with the well. Choose a cost the character would rather keep than be forgiven.

  • Name one person who is owed. A wrong done to a town is a speech; a wrong done to a piano mover is a scene.
  • Let the answer be no sometimes. The character still has to work out a decent life.

Questions and answers

What makes a good redemption story?

A wrong the reader can name, one person who was hurt by it, and a price the character would rather not pay. On this list a queen can give a castle back only by spending the winter under canvas.

Does the character have to be forgiven?

No. In the group Forgiven or not the answers run from an easy yes to a calm no. One man is forgiven by everyone but the dog, and one friend sets a price: a single honest year.

Can I use these for a villain's redemption arc?

Yes. The wrongs come without names, so they fit any cast. The knight who ran from the bridge he swore to hold could be your villain, and so could the dragon who burned a harvest and now pulls plows.

Are these prompts religious?

No. Redemption here has its everyday meaning: making amends to a person you wronged. No faith is named, and the page teaches nothing about any belief.